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Tuesday, 8 August 2017

The Dog Barked

WALT- be able to elobrate on a cople of words. Our cople of words were the dog barked. the blue part is the part I added in the black part ia the part I elablrated in


THE DOG BARKED

Last sunday at Nici’s house while the chocolate coulored dog was climbing on the window it made a loud and scary “WOOF!!”, it made me jump. The dog barked because he saw a grey cat strolling around inside.

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2 comments:

  1. Annameika Jack3:46 pm, August 12, 2017

    Well done Connie, you have elaborated the original sentence beautifully. I love that you have used speech marks. Does Nici really have a chocolate coloured dog?

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    1. Anonymous12:33 pm, August 17, 2017

      Hi Mrs Jack, Nici actualy does have a chocolate coulerd dog and he is lovely. Do you have a dog if so what is its name?

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