SNOT!!!

We Were learnig to make show don't tell where we are not allowed to say what it is.

Success Criteria

Write 8-10 sentences using Wow words and similes.

1 sentence has alliteration in it.

Hook your reader in. (Make your first sentence interesting/ different)

OMG!!! The mixture looked disgusting and like a green gooey pancake. I was so excited to stick my hands in it! “What did Mrs McGuinniety get us do!?” The contents looked disgusting and gross. Once I touched it I realized it wasn't so bad. Then I sniffed the substance and it smelt like my favorite soap. I could hear the noise of people screaming “eww” and “yuk” but I thought “cool”. For some reason when I touched it I felt happy. The mix was just gross it felt weird when I touched it. That was the slippery, slimey, smelly, snot.

Spencer Park!!!!!!

We did wrote a recount about going to spencer park and having fun. In our recount when hade to have first, next, then, after that and so on.

We went to spencer park to get to know each other.

I AM SO EXCITED FOR SPENCER PARK!!!! is what i said last friday. Last Friday the year 4-6 children went to spencer park to get to know each other.

When we got there we had morning tea. First I went on the playground to play with my best friend Ayliah and the first thing we went on was actually the big blue slide. At Spencer Park I got to meet Shine and Riley my old friends we played on the tyre swing thing together. There were three more schools a high school and to other schools just like ours.  All of our teachers wanted us to be the best school there.

Then I went to the flying fox with Ayliah and found my first best friend Ebony she gave me a huge hug that was really strong (she hugged me because we have not seen each other in 2 years)Then I saw her dad Mat he was so nice he was even helping out he all of the school.

Then we went to the beach and we had to create a tower My team was Ayliah and Emma N We ended up having the smallest tower because someone stole the stick that we put down waiting to put into Our tiny tower we just made of sand at that point We knew we would lose But we didn't give up we keep on trying to get out of  made of Driftwood but it wasn't very hard Pull out because the driftwood Was stuck, In the end we were happy for the three teams that won the first place was for the tallest second place words for collaborated and third place was for creative. Did we walked back to the place where we put our bags down with brown shoes and socks and bags and then we walked back to the field.

When we were back we were were able to choose to do sports or just play on the playground I just played on the Playground because I'm not that much of a fan of Sports. Ayliah and I went to her secret place and then she fell in and I just laughed because she fell but then i helped her up because she is my best friend. Then we got in the bus and got back to school.

I was so happy that we had gone to spencer park with all of my friends and some from the other schools.

Colaboration

This week at school we have been learning about colaboration.Colaboration is working together in a group.It can all so be eeking.When ever I Colaborate wil a group I have fun but sometimes its anoying.What colaboration looks like, it looks like people having fun and eeking.When you are eeking you are knee to knee eye to eye.What colaboration sounds, it sounds like talking with an inside voice.Colaboration feels like excitement enjoying and fun.

That Was Summer Poem

That Was Summer!

I remember smelling BBQ chicken

I remember tasting sweet McDonald's

I remember seeing a seagull at school

That was summer

I remember feeling excited because it was my 9 b-day

I remember hearing annoying crickets creating noise

That was summer.

last week in writing we wrote a poem that had adjectives and wow words in it about summer