We Were learnig to make show don't tell where we are not allowed to say what it is.
Success Criteria
Write 8-10 sentences using Wow words and similes.
1 sentence has alliteration in it.
Hook your reader in. (Make your first sentence interesting/ different)
OMG!!! The mixture looked disgusting and like a green gooey pancake. I was so excited to stick my hands in it! “What did Mrs McGuinniety get us do!?” The contents looked disgusting and gross. Once I touched it I realized it wasn't so bad. Then I sniffed the substance and it smelt like my favorite soap. I could hear the noise of people screaming “eww” and “yuk” but I thought “cool”. For some reason when I touched it I felt happy. The mix was just gross it felt weird when I touched it. That was the slippery, slimey, smelly, snot.
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