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Thursday, 23 March 2017

That Was Summer Poem

That Was Summer!
I remember smelling BBQ chicken

I remember tasting sweet McDonald's

I remember seeing a seagull at school

That was summer

I remember feeling excited because it was my 9 b-day

I remember hearing annoying crickets creating noise

That was summer.

last week in writing we wrote a poem that had adjectives and wow words in it about summer
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:50 am, April 06, 2017

    Hi, I really like all the pretty and colourful words!!! I wrote about Summer too! Maybe next time you could put a photo of a sun maybe next time!

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  2. Anonymous10:22 am, April 07, 2017

    Great work Connie! I like how you used lots of wow words. I also wrote something about summer too! Maybe next time, you can check your punctuation.

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