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Friday, 24 November 2017

ALARM CALL

This week we have been writing a story about a photo of a kitten and a troll. In the picture it looks like the goblin is going to step on the kitten. But we had to make our own twist, my twist was about how the goblin was a naghty little boy who was sneeking down the hall to find the x-mas preseants.

ALARM CALL

“Ahhhhh a MONSTER named Ivan”  Monsters are mythical creatures and this one looks like a troll or goblin.

Now this Ivan is nothing but trouble he’s green, slimy and ugly, he has a beard that goes all the way down to his knees and ruby red lips.The creepy troll crept down the street looking for his house. He crept down to address number 90 along the hallway and could not find anything but then he stopped...

There was a kitten named Mr Meow in his way it was taking up the whole path, (The kitten was a marshmallow, white and fluffy) next thing Ivan knows is that Mr Meow has woken up his mom and dad! Ivan was scared he knew he was supposed to be sleeping. “Are you trying to get at the christmas presents, AGAIN!?” says mom “back to bed” dad said “ohhww man” Ivan whispers.

THE END

By Connie

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